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@Fithi-Teklom Fithi-Teklom changed the title Manchester| 25-ITP-SEP| Fithi Teklom| Sprint-1 | Book Library Manchester| 25-ITP-SEP| Fithi Teklom| Sprint 2 | Book Library Dec 16, 2025
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Can you check if any of this general feedback can help you further improve your code?
https://github.com/cjyuan/Module-Data-Flows/blob/book-library-feedback/debugging/book-library/feedback.md

Doing so can help me speed up the review process. Thanks.

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debugging/book-library/script.js Outdated
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if (!title.value.trim() || !author.value.trim() || !pages.value.trim()) {
alert("Please fill all fields!");
return false;
}
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Indentation is off.

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library.push(book);
render();
}
let book = new Book(title.value.trim(), author.value.trim(), pagesNumber, check.checked);
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  • Could consider saving preprocessed and sanitised input in some variables first to

    • improve performance
    • to avoid accidently using raw input later

  • Not all integers are valid number of pages.

debugging/book-library/script.js
Comment on lines 66 to 67
let pagesCell = row.insertCell(2);
let wasReadCell = row.insertCell(3);
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If a variable is not going to be reassigned a value, it is best practice to declare the variable using const.

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Comment on lines 78 to 85
let readStatus = "";
if (myLibrary[i].check == false) {
if (myLibrary[i].check == true) {
readStatus = "Yes";
} else {
readStatus = "No";
}
changeBut.innerText = readStatus;
toggleReadBtn.innerText = readStatus;
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This could be a good opportunity to practice using the ? : conditional operator. Can you rewrite the code on lines 79–85 as a single statement?

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deleteBtn.dataset.index = i;
deleteCell.appendChild(deleteBtn);
deleteBtn.className = "btn btn-warning";
deleteBtn.innerHTML = "Delete";
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Why assign text to a DOM element via three different properties?

  • 'textContent` on line 71
  • innerText on line 85
  • innerHTML on line 97

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changeBut.className = "btn btn-success";
wasReadCell.appendChild(changeBut);
let toggleReadBtn = document.createElement("button");
toggleReadBtn.dataset.index = i;
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What is the purpose of this statement? Where is the assigned value used in your code?

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for (let n = rowsNumber - 1; n > 0; n-- ) {
table.deleteRow(n);
}
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Could consider using a more efficient approach to clear the table.

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The most recent changes look good, but they may have introduced a bug in the app.

Can you try adding a new book through the UI and see if the book list is still rendered correctly?

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