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| //формируем ID по длине массива + 1 | ||
| let correctId = this.dataBase.length+1; | ||
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| this.dataBase.push({id:correctId,name:name,thername:thername,numb:`(${firstThreeNumb})${secondTwoNumb}-${therdTwoNumb}-${fourthThreeNumb}`}) |
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тут оччень длинная строка, предлагаю сделать отдельный конструктор для создания пользователя
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| PhoneApp.prototype.usersRemoving = function(username) { | ||
| this.dataBase.forEach((value, index, arr)=> { | ||
| if (value.name === username) { | ||
| delete this.dataBase[index]; |
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будет дыра в массиве,
использования метода .filter - тут подойдет лучше
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| PhoneApp.prototype.searchUsers = function(username) { | ||
| let allUsers = []; | ||
| this.dataBase.forEach((value, index, arr)=> { |
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тоже подойдет лучше метод filter
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| this.dataBase.forEach((value, index, arr)=> { | ||
| let correctId = index + 1; | ||
| if (value.id == userId) { | ||
| this.dataBase[index] = {id:correctId,name:name,thername:thername,numb:`(${firstThreeNumb})${secondTwoNumb}-${therdTwoNumb}-${fourthThreeNumb}`}; |
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{id:correctId,name:name,thername:thername,numb:`(${firstThreeNumb})${secondTwoNumb}-${therdTwoNumb}-${fourthThreeNumb}`};это очень длинная строка, легче это называть в духе "makeUser" или что то такое
она даже не очень помещается в экран
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